政府责任法制化，是责任政府、法治政府、服务政府题中应有之意。

【查阅辞典】题中应有之意（无）

【中式英语】The systematized legislation for the governmental responsibilities should be included in responsible government, the government ruled by law as well as service government.（摘自《清华大学学报》）

【求疵笔记】由于逐字对译，译文将原文很简单的句子译得叠床架屋，读起来不通透。如果吃透原文精神，译文也可以很简单。这个所谓“题中应有之意”系指一个责任政府、法治政府、服务政府应该将其政府责任法制化。

【修改建议】A responsible, law-ruled and service-providing government should institutionalize its responsibilities.

阿林一直在找工作，但是他的工作还在天上飞着呢。

【查阅辞典】找find，look for工作 work，job飞fly

【中式英语】Alin is always looking for a job, but his job is flying in the sky.

【求疵笔记】英谚曰:A bird in the hand is worth two in the bush.（双鸟在林，不如一鸟在手。）它派生出一种说法:a bird in the bush（林中之鸟），就是“不在掌握之中”、“还没有到手的东西”。

【修改建议】Alin is always looking for a job, but his job is a bird in the bush.

阿林试图得到她的同意，但是没有成功。

【查阅辞典】试图try，attempt同意agree，consent，approve徒劳futile effort，fruitless labour

【中式英语】Alin tried to get her consent, but he failed.

【求疵笔记】“但是没有成功”可译作in vain。in vain= without success，相当于汉语“徒劳地”。凡表示“毫无结果”、“白费力气”等都可以采用。The Penguin English Student's Dictionary（《企鹅学生英语词典》）例句:He tried in vain to save his son. （他竭力地挽救儿子，但是毫无结果。）

【修改建议】Alin tried in vain to get her consent.

近代中国北方外向型经济的兴起

【查阅辞典】外向型经济export-oriented economy

【中式英语】Rise of the exporting economy in northern area of China in modern times（摘自《史学月刊》）

【求疵笔记】“外向型经济”常被误译作exporting economy（出口经济），external economy（对外经济），或outbound economy（向外经济）。正确的表达应是export-oriented economy 或external-oriented economy。原文“经济”有3个修饰词，其中“近代”和“外向型”可以用形容词译出，“中国北方”可以用介词短语译出。

【修改建议】Rise of the modern export-oriented economy in northern China.